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It was thebest of times, it was the worst oftimes, it was the age of wisdom, it was theage of foolishness, it was the epochof belief, it was the epoch ofincredulity, it was the season of Light, it wasthe season of Darkness, it wasthe spring of hope, it was the winter of despair,we had everything before us,we had nothing before us, we were all going directto Heaven, we were all goingdirect the other way--in short, the period was sofar like the present period,that some of its noisiest authorities insisted onits being received, for goodor for evil, in the superlative degree ofcomparison only. ---- “A tale of twocities ”
CharlesDickens
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pҪֵ،WNļܸܲõ؞ԺM(zhn)ʂ…)^ɺȻ(һ“solivingindependently at an early age is not suitable for all young adults”Ȼ،Ԓ}Mһչ_)߀һЩ^Y^C(j)(an observation showsthatmany University graduated students are unemployed. Therefore they will not be…)
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